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[Adventures in Atreia 1]

Needs lots of work

Hit detection is off. I'm dying even before I hit the enemies and I'm also missing jumps because I'm landing on the other side of platforms?????? And for a side scroller the levels are waaaay to short.

Good animation throughout, but a game has to be more than just good looking. Gotta fix those control issues.

[Sunday Driver: Pinball!]

Needs a lot of work...

The board looks okay, nothing wrong with that but there's a lot you're missing on what to score with. You do have bumpers but still need to add gates, buttons, holes, slides (the thin metal things you run over for points). And why do you get points for hitting the flippers? I've never seen that on a pinball machine before.
Also the speed is a huge factor, that ball is moving... very... s l o w l y .... While I realize this is your demo, as it stands, I can play it without ever losing a ball - except I don't have much to aim at... Increasing the speed will add to the challenge.

[Doctor Zed]

Control issues

It's obious you've put in the work, but the problem is, while it's an easy game to play, over all it's hard to control. I'm shooting and bouncing back and forth, trying to jump over things and shoot send you flying, hit detiction is off, and somethmes it hard to see what you're shooting at. Having a hard time hitting what you're shooting at is tough for a shooter game. I know you're trying to emulate low gravity but even a vet like me is having problems keeping the guy steady.

Switching shots is a nice touch to up the challenge, but added with the control problems is just gonna frustrate players, espically some younger ones that won't have the patience. Also maybe a zoom out feature so you can see where the enemies are? The planet idea is cool but, most of the time you're enemies are off screen.

Sorry bud it looks well done but it's an easy game that's hard to play.

[Arachnophilia]

Great game

I find it funny that at the start, I tired to concentrate on making a spider web, then as the game picks up, you natuarally make a spider web as your webs keep snapping. This is a wicked game.

[Hedgehog Launch]

Hah awesome

Quick little game, a bit easy but who cares it was a lot of fun launching that little guy, you should have contest to see you can grab the most cash in one round though. A great launcher over all with an actual ending.. nice work.

[Law of the West Pinball]

need some work

The delayed reaction does need to be addressed, once everything is a bit more crisp this should shine, but everything from the bumpers to slides seems just a fraction of a second off.

Also, you can reload back into the spring, which shouldn't happen on a real pinball board and the upper left hand corner does not track well. My shots up there would stop dead most of the time on that one corner.

Looks and souns great but gameplay is gonna be your biggest hurdle here.

[Arkabol]

It's good

It's slick looking, the sound effect are cool, every seems to work like it's supposed to, a very good remake.

[Elliptic]

It's alright

gameplay was a bit easy, with music and other effects it would defenatly bring the entertainment value up. But it's good, hope to see the finished version.

I'm waiting for a more spactic avoider that might get some action fans into it since they hvae to go like 5000 mph to avoid things. Like exploding circles perhaps?

[Governor of Poker]

Yep good poker

Poker games are simple, it's about poker. However, this one looks great, sounds great, and has plenty of places to go and things to buy and different ways to make money, which makes it even better.

Poker players will play just about anything just because it's poker. This game will make thm play LONGER. Nice work.

[Androkids]

pretty damn good

Yeah I'd let my nephews and neices play this. Definiatly liking how you've made it look like a kid scribbled all the levels down on a piece of paper. Good music, just fix the problems the reviewer below me identified and this is a nice peice of work.

Oh and guys, YOU'RE PLAYING A KIDS GAME! Rate the GAME itself!